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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many
people
 have left rural to urban areas in three countries with the prospects for 2025. The
number
 of
people
 moving is growing every year in all countries, but the prospect for 2025 for
country
 B tells us that the
number
 of
people
 will remain the same at 30
million
people
 as in 2020. Before that, the
number
 of
people
 in
country
 B from 2000 to 2020 increased gradually with 10
million
people
 moving to the urban areas. In
country
 A the
number
 of
people
 always steadily increased from 2000 to 2020, starting from approximately 20
million
people
 to 80
million
. By 2025 it is projected to be just over 90
million
. In
country
C
 from 2000 to 2005
number
 of
people
 gradually increased from approximately 5
million
 to 10
million
. After 2005
country
 experienced a sharp increase for all subsequent years, reaching 80
million
people
 in 2020.
Country
C
 in the year 2025 is supposed to reach over 100
million
people
.
Overall
, the graph highlights significant rural-to-urban migration trends from 2000 to future 2025.
Country
 A and
Country
C
 show substantial increases, with
Country
C
 overtaking
Country
 A. By 2025, both countries are predicted to have over 90
million
people
.
Country
 B shows a steadier increase, with no changes for the future.
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