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6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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News stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Full-time university students spend most of the time studying. They should be doing other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?