The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how many grown-up individuals joined in six various sports, in a certain place, in two years 1997 and 2017.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Gentle walking remained the most popular sport among people in both years. It can be seen that Basketball and Cricket had the lowest Linking Words
number
Use synonyms
participants
in 1997 and 2017, relatively.
looking at the details, in 1997 Gentle walking attracted more youngsters and Change preposition
of participants
has
the highest amount of participants, about 50 Wrong verb form
had
number
in Use synonyms
thousands
, and after that Gym with about 37 numbers allocated figures to itself. As the less popular sport, Basketball appeared with just under 10 Correct article usage
the thousands
Use synonyms
number
in Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
thousands
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Correct article usage
the thousands
Also
, in 2017 the Linking Words
numbers
of matures registered in Gentle walking peaked at approximately 550 Fix the agreement mistake
number
number
in thousands, and in the following Hiking and Football have the most applicants, relatively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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