The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the proposed transformation of an industrial plant.
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this
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area
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is planned to change from an industrial site to a new residential space. In detail, there are going to appear the construction of housing units and various amenities replacing office spaces and a factory.
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with, in the west of the industrial
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, there only exists parking and storage, which will be removed to build a building next to a private road including three-bedroom houses
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the top left-hand of the industrial
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and four-bedroom houses on the opposite side.
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the development plan, the East side where the factory currently appears can be made way for a parking
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and apartment near Pie Walk. Turning to the middle of the map, there is now an empty yard, which will be renovated into communal gardens.
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the improvement map, crossing a private road from the gardens can meet parking garages facing Swallow Street in the South of the picture where the current offices and a canteen are located.
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, the entrance and reception on the eastern side are anticipated to be three double-bedroom houses accessible through communal gardens.
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