Some people think that students benefit greatly from going to private secondary schools, but others assert that private secondary schools have a negative impact on the young generation and the society alike. Discuss both views.

Parents

have different perspectives on education,

such

as secondary

school

for their

child

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. There is no doubt that to achieve the competencies of a student in secondary

school

, they should have a personal teacher,

while

some

parents

suggest that the children should play

together with

their friends in the same age group. Personally, I believe that

parents

should consider private

school

in secondary

school

for future education.

Along with

my opinion,

this

essay will discuss both views. On the one hand, some

parents

decide to educate

thier

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their

children

in

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home.

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condition

make

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student

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students

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can

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study at his or her own pace.

For example

, the children have a problem with the math topics, and the teacher will explain more about

this

specific topic only for

this

child. The teacher can

also

monitor and evaluate

of

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the progress of the

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students

in

the

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detail. The other reason is

parents

are not satisfied

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local

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the local

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shool

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school

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which the

limitation of

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facilities for study.

On the other hand

, the cost of private

schooll

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school

which more expensive than local

school

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schools

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.

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is one

the

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of the

parents

consider

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considered

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in the private

school

. The lack of social skills

are

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the

commen probelm

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common problem

for

this

,

however

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however,

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the

parents

anticapates

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anticipates

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anticipated

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some

neighborhood

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to their house to

paly

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play

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together.

For instance

,

some

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for some

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students who join in

exctracullicular

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extracurriculars

like futsal or baske ball there is

need

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a need

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more

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people to play together. In conclusion,

while

some

parents

feel that private

school

is better than local

school

, I contend

the

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opposing viewpoint. Even though past and present circumstances may appear disparate, it is necessary for us to learn and reflect on events in history to progress ourselves towards a better future.