Task 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2017, 2011 and 2015.
The given chart illustrates the changes in the amount of millions of
families
in the United States by their yearly benefits in 3 years.
It is remarkable that the amount of income per millions of families
who earned $100,000 or above has increased in the final year.
Moving to more detailed data it can be seen that families
which earned about $25,000 - $49,999 every year had a small gap compared with families
that earned 25,000 or below, sharing the same amount of families
which is about 25 - 30 million throughout the time.
According to
the demonstrated information families
which earned $50,000 - $74,999 remained stable whereas
households whose income was about $75,000 - $99.999 underwent a fluctuation between 2007 and 2001. Also
, consisted of 15 million families
in 2015. Finally
, people who earned over $100,000 reached approximately 33 million in 2015.Submitted by esenkulova.ulbosyn on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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