Task 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2017, 2011 and 2015.

Task 1

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2017, 2011 and 2015.
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The given chart illustrates the changes in the amount of millions of
families
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in the United States by their yearly benefits in 3 years. It is remarkable that the amount of income per millions of
families
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who earned $100,000 or above has increased in the final year. Moving to more detailed data it can be seen that
families
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which earned about $25,000 - $49,999 every year had a small gap compared with
families
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that earned 25,000 or below, sharing the same amount of
families
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which is about 25 - 30 million throughout the time.
According to
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the demonstrated information
families
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which earned $50,000 - $74,999 remained stable
whereas
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households whose income was about $75,000 - $99.999 underwent a fluctuation between 2007 and 2001.
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, consisted of 15 million
families
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in 2015.
Finally
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, people who earned over $100,000 reached approximately 33 million in 2015.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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