Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Public concern regarding a lot of crimes in many notions is still

ingreasingly

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increasingly

increasing

topical

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now and the next ten years. These problems occur because many

counties

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countries

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still can not tackle an increase

of

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the

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apply

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unemployment

rates

and insecurities.

Firstly

, in many countries, individuals face difficulties in order to

getting

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jobs.

This

is because the total

job

vacancies

exceeds

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to

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the number of productive people seeking jobs.

For instance

, after graduating from

my

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college in 2016, I needed to spend around three years to be hired

in

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the

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Stated-Owned Company in Indonesia after experiencing many rejections from

Comercial Institutions

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corporate institutions

in which I proposed to be their salarymen.

In addition

, these difficulties lead people to do criminal actions soaring crime

rates

since they

require

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to complete their basic needs

by

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zero salaries.

Consequently

, increasing crime

rates

contribute

insecurities

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to insecurities

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since individuals face

the

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high

probabilities

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probability

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to be theft,

Secondly

, there are two steps which can be applied to overcome these problems. The first way is establishing many

job

opportunities to meet the

demand

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demands

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of

job

seekers.

Subsequently

, the higher

job

offering can generate

the

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reduction

of

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crimes because of plummeting

in

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apply

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unemployment

rates

. The second step, educating families to control their birth will affect the

decreasing

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of overpopulation in the future.

Subsequently

, many countries will have sufficient places to accommodate the lower

job

seekers in the future.

To sum up

, the high

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number of unemployed

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people affects the increasing number of insecurities. In order to solve these problems,

government

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the government

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has to level up

job

opportunities and control parents’ birth.