some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Problems
related to the ecosystem have been of increased concern in recent times. Solution-driven awareness programs must be designed to address the issue. I partially agree with the belief that it could be solved either at the national level or only be improved at the international level. both the views
along with
my opinion are discussed in forthcoming paragraphs. Global cooperation is essential to solve the issues faced by multiple nations. I believe that continually
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the awareness campaign
as well as
help centres for the individuals could undoubtedly benefit the migrants.
moreover
, the population of one country can develop a better understanding
about
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the ecological
problems
of the different nations.
this
interconnectivity of the nations can solve
problems
of different regions by the individuals of another region.
besides
this
, global identification and
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capacity can better help the developing countries and inferior regions marked on the global map.
for instance
,
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of
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pollution treaty by
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Health Organization - WHO at
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headquarters was proven beneficial to
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countries
such
as China, Vietnam and Thailand.
On the other hand
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at the national level and tailoring the alternatives keeping the cultural differences in mind radiates the positive changes for the residents of the individual country. The
desinging
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design
of solutions by the native official bodies can be beneficial to local residents in terms of applying and getting informed about the same.
similarly
, it is easy to map out a general protocol for a specific locality by understanding and highlighting the originating hindrance in detail. Taking consideration of
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scheme ' for vehicles by
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government was proven
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adequate solution for traffic and pollution together.
whereas
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compared
to Delhi similar solution was not effective for
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state of Germany. Henceforth, enforcing regulations for environmental
problems
keeping in mind the regional aspects of the issue and tailoring the alternatives
likewise
is more approachable in
compariosn
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comparison
to international ideas.
To sum up
the crux of the topic, my opinion emphasizes designing more specificity toward the
problems
as compared to a multi-level approach to the issues.
In addition
to that, I firmly believe certain
problems
can be identified and solved by using
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of alternatives from local and international markets.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystems
  • interconnectivity
  • Paris Agreement
  • tailored solutions
  • enforce
  • regulations
  • consensus
  • multi-level approach
  • empower
  • international collaboration
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