The chart below gives information on the average cost of a monthly plan from four different mobile phone providers in a European country, between January and September 2012, measured in euros.
"The following chart presents data regarding the average monthly plan costs of four distinct mobile phone providers in a European country during the period from January to September 2012, denoted in
euros
.
Examining the line graph, we can observe some changes. The average cost of plans from Lex mobile phone Use synonyms
provider
experienced only slight fluctuations with no significant changes. from January to September in January it was 13 Fix the agreement mistake
providers
euros
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however
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then
it increased Linking Words
till
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to
euros
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Alpha telephone provider underwent noticeable alterations ,Linking Words
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initially
it cost only 5 Add a comma
initially,
euros
at the beginning of the yearUse synonyms
,
and improved considerably Remove the comma
apply
till
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to
euros
. Now, let’s discuss the other operators.
Domo demonstrated fluctuating changes, Use synonyms
initially
experiencing a decline Linking Words
in
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of
euros
, followed by a slight increase, and Use synonyms
then
a more significant rise Linking Words
with
23 Change preposition
of
euros
. These three companies encountered significant adjustments, with desirable outcomes, Use synonyms
while
only Sim TX experienced a decline, indicating poorer performance with only 7 Linking Words
euros
approximately .
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Overall
, it can be concluded that these companies underwent various adjustments, with three of them displaying favourable outcomes and only one provider exhibiting inferior results."Linking Words
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