The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the changes in fast food
consumption
by Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
except for fish
and chips
, all fast foods increased as time proceed
until 2000. After its high peak, Wrong verb form
proceeded
Hambugers
and pizza remained steady around the Correct your spelling
hamburgers
year
1995. Fish
and chips
witnessed short
period of fluctuations for around 10 years until Add an article
a short
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
plunge
.
Wrong verb form
plunged
Hambugers
have Correct your spelling
Hamburgers
its
massive jump from under 20 Change the word
a
times
eaten to just around 80 times
eaten. This
continued to steadily increased
until it Change the verb
increase
hits
its highest point Wrong verb form
hit
with
around 100 Change preposition
of
times
in 1995 and continue
to Wrong verb form
continued
remained
steady. Followed by pizza, increased dramatically from the Change the verb
remain
year
1975 just below the consumption
of hambuger
and reaching its highest number in 1975 with just above 80 Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
times
eaten. Both relatively stable since the year
1995.
However
, in 1975 fish
and chips
gained its
popularity with the highest Correct pronoun usage
apply
consumption
of 100 times
eaten but a sudden flop in the year
1990 and slight
Correct article usage
a slight
increased
in 1985. Since Replace the word
increase
then
fish
and chips
faced a slow reduction in consumption
with just below 40 times
eaten in 2000.Submitted by studymeterr on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, year, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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