The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The bar chart and the line graph depict information about
participants
who have joined the Olympics since it started. Generally, the chart shows that male participants
had been increasing steadily over the years. While
in the line, graph
illustrates the significant changes in the number of Add an article
the graph
a graph
overall
participants
that had been growing over the years.
Firstly
, the line graph shows that the statistic
of general Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
participants
who have joined the Olympics always increased from 1924 to 2012 and was able to hit more than ten thousand
people.
Also
, it can be seen that the chart shows that male participants
had the greatest number each year, they were able to reach nearly six thousand
people in 2012. Also
, the bars kept growing very steadily from 1924 to 2012. However
, from 1924 to 1952 there were only a few female participants
that joined the Olympics around less than one thousand
people, but there was a noticeable rise in 2012, they were able to reach more than four thousand
participants
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