The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparison where relevant.
The
pie
charts illustrate the information about the
export
activities from the US to
Vietnam
and vice versa. There are no similarities in categories between both
pie
charts. The
export
is categorized into six categories, from
Vietnam
to the US, most of the things that are exported are daily needs,
on the other hand
, the US exported machines and agriculture-related. From
Vietnam
to the US, the most that the US needs is coffee as the
export
activity reaches 23
million
dollars
as seen from the
pie
chart.
In contrast
, the Americans mostly
export
aircraft parts to the Vietnamese and it reaches 72
million
dollars
.
Moreover
, the
pie
chart for
export
activity from
Vietnam
to the US gives information that the second most exported thing is fruit and vegetables, meanwhile, from
Vietnam
to the US, it is not stated what the category is, as it only states others. And,
overall
it can be seen that the
export
activity from the US reaches more than 50
million
dollars
, but from
Vietnam
, it only reaches 23
million
dollars
at maximum.
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