The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the average spending for different areas of the families in a country on a weekly basis
in1968
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in 1968
and 2018. In 1968, households spent 35% of income on food, which took up the most. 10% of the income
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were
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spent on housing and clothing and
footware
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footwear
respectively, followed by
the
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apply
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leisurement
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measurement
, having only 8% of
total
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the total
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weekly
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expenses
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expense
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expenses
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. In 2018, people spent the most on leisure, which grew up to 22%. There were around 18% of income contributed to housing. It's shown families had been spending the least on fuel and power,
where
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took up only 6% in 1968 and 4% in 2018 only. Comparing the spending in 1968 and 2018, there was
an
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significant drop
on
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the expense of food, from 35% to 17%.
In addition
,
household
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households
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seemed to pay less
on
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for
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clothing and personal
good
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goods
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, given number
were
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double
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doubled
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down.
Whereas
, the spending on leisure, transport and housing grew, having
leasure
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leisure
pleasure
overtaking the food and becoming the biggest weekly spending.
Although
families' consuming behaviour changed
along
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the years, the spending on household goods remained the same at 16%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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