Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
As the number of
professionals
working abroad increases, it is often discussed whether they
should stay where they did their training or they should be free to move to another country
if they desired to. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I think that highly qualified workers should be required to work
in the country
where they were trained.
First of all, each country
has their own standards in the professional field, which has a great impact on the safety of their work
. This
is because of the different circumstances that are present in each area. A doctor working in Korea, for instance
, would have better hands-on knowledge and experience, compared to an Indonesian doctor, in some aspects, such
as snow season-related diseases, which do not occur in Indonesia. The same goes for engineers who have a variety of standardized skills around the world. By staying to work
in their country
of training, technicians will have more accuracy working in their field.
In contrast
, by letting professionals
pick their own preferred country
to work
in, they will feel more comfortable doing their acquired jobs. Furthermore
, they will feel more happy working in a country
of their own liking than being forced into working back in their location of training. For example
, an engineer working abroad in his dream country
would do much better at his job just because of his feeling of contentness
. Correct your spelling
contentedness
However
, a comfortable work
environment that makes workers feel happy can also
be created back in the country
they were educated in. This
requires help from the government to impose some type of regulation for healthy and suitable work
environments so that professionals
won't have to feel a desire to work
abroad.
In conclusion, I believe requiring professionals
to work
in the country
they trained in has a more positive outcome than letting them go to work
anywhere. While
it is also
wise to grant them freedom, I think it is better to give professionals
boundaries in regard to the safety and accuracy aspects of the professional working world.Submitted by tsaniaaqilau on
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Introduction & Conclusion
Ensure that the essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction should present the topic and outline your stance. The body should explore each view with supporting reasons and examples, and the conclusion should restate your position clearly.
Paragraphing & Cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices and paragraphing effectively to manage the logical flow of ideas. Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and that all sentences relate directly to it.
Task Response
Fully address all parts of the task. Spend roughly equal time discussing both views provided in the prompt and ensure you provide a balanced discussion before stating your opinion.
Supporting Examples
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
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Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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