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The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table provides detailed information about underground systems in six major cities around the world, comparing their number of
lines
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, total length in miles, annual journeys in
billion
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billions
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 and cost per ticket in US dollars. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, New York
City
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Subway
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 has the most
lines
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 with the longest total route
while
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 the fewest
lines
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 are operated by
London
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Tube
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.
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, Beijing
Subway
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 carries out the most trips every year and the most and least expensive fees belong to
London
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Tube
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 and Mexico
City
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 Metro, respectively. With regards to the number of metro
lines
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,
New
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the New
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 York
City
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Subway
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 takes the lead with 24 tracks available, constituting up to 659 miles in total length.
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 is significantly longer than that of Beijing
Subway
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 which owns the second most railways with 19 tracks provided but running only 357 miles of route.
London
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Tube
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,
on the contrary
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, offers the fewest options with only 11
lines
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. Even though being tremendously behind
New
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the New
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 York
City
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Subway
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 in terms of routes and running length,
Beijing
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the Beijing
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Subway
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 is considerably more popular and transports about 3.6 billion passengers annually, compared to only 1.65 billion travellers per year run by the former system. It is
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 noticeable from the table that the cheapest tickets are sold by Mexico
City
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 Metro at 0.23 US dollars whilst passengers have to pay 7.30 US dollars when using the
London
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Tube
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Vocabulary: Replace the words lines, city, subway, london, tube with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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