The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustates about the data of a partcular country recycled different types of materials to reuse them from 1982 to 2010 ,
while
figures were calculated as percentages.
Overall
, paper and the cupboards were the largely recycled material for the given time period
while
plastic were recycled at a lower
rate
for 28 years. Paper and cupboards started at exactly 65% at the begining of the period, that number increased to 70% in 1986 and again dropped to 65% in 1990.
Then
the recycling
rate
had striked their peak of 80% in 1994 before it reduced to 70% in 2010.
On the other hand
, Glass containers were recycled at 50% in 1982
whereas
it considerably declined to 40% after eight years.
However
, the
rate
was gradually increased to 60% in 2010. With regards to Aluminium cans, which were recycled at approximately 2% in 1982.
Then
the reclycling
rate
rose significantly over the years and hit off at 45%
at the end
of the given timeline.
Moreover
, It can be noticeable that recycling process of plasctic had a slow growth from the begining of the period which started with 1% and reached it to just under 10% in 2010.
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