Some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable, while others think it makes a person less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is known that we can talk to our relatives or friends who live abroad or far from us,
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. It is so important to Correct article usage
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. some people believe that the Replace the word
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, it makes us less social. I am going to explain some reasons in each paragraph about it.
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First,
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it is so dancer for children. because they do not have limits and control. Change the word
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. The example shows us Use synonyms
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can make some people less social.
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Second,
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ansocial
and shyne person. Because social media and the Correct your spelling
antisocial
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do not face-to-face a lot of people can lie or hide their real character. Use synonyms
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To sum up
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comfortable. In my opinion, it will become the Use synonyms
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Introduction
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Paragraphing
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Coherence
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Supporting Points
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Developing Ideas
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Linking Words
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Conclusion
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Grammar and Accuracy
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