Some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable, while others think it makes a person less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is known that we can talk to our relatives or friends who live abroad or far from us,
while
Change preposition
on
Internet
. It is so important to Correct article usage
the Internet
communication
. some people believe that the Replace the word
communicate
internet
makes us more social. I strongly believe that even if it is so comfortable for communication
, it makes us less social. I am going to explain some reasons in each paragraph about it.
First,
the internet
is a virtual world and it gets our time so much especial
it is so dancer for children. because they do not have limits and control. Change the word
especially
On the other hand
, it is so beneficial for adults. They use
Wrong verb form
used
to
it in their work and social Change preposition
apply
life
. for example
, one of my friends bought a mobile phone for his daughter and she passes her time to
much. Correct your spelling
too
finally
, she did became
ansocial person Change the verb form
become
while
Internet
. The example shows us Internet
can make some people less social.
Second,
aggording
some research Correct your spelling
according
internet
makes an ansocial
and shyne person. Because social media and the Correct your spelling
antisocial
an social
unsocial
internet
do not face-to-face a lot of people can lie or hide their real character. For instance
my cousin Alis she
is a hacker and we can say; his computer is all things for her and she lives in virtual Correct pronoun usage
apply
life
. One day he said to me '' I can speak on social media to everyone. However
, I can not speak face to face. When I see my friends or relatives in the street, I do not know how ı can have good communication
. In my opinion, virtual life
affects my communication
with real life
''.
To sum up
, the internet
is so important for us. We can find every information and it makes our life
comfortable. In my opinion, it will become the best
important thing in the future.Correct your spelling
most
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