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The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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The line graph provides information about the percentage of four various materials that were recycled over the period of 28 years between 1982 and 2010 in a particular country.
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, there is a rising trend in four categories, but some of them rose steadily,
while
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 others increased with fluctuations. In 1982, the category of paper and cardboard stayed at 65%,
then
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 it rose by 5 per
cent
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 and dropped to its initial percentage in 1990. After it experienced a significant rise to 80% in 1994, afterwards, it declined steadily, reaching 70% in 2010.
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, plastics first appeared in 1990,
where
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 they rose slightly in the subsequent years, rising from 3 to 9 per
cent
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. In comparison, aluminium cans began at 4% in 1986, where they rose steadily up to 45%. Only 50 per
cent
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 of glass containers was recycled in 1982,
then
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 the percentage of glass containers dropped significantly to 40% in 1990 and it increased up to 60 per
cent
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 in the subsequent years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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