The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The diagram below shows the amount of
sales
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of Fair-trade
coffee
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and
bananas
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in millions of
euros
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in five European nations from 1999 to 2004 .These nations are
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UK
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the UK
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,Switzerland,
Denmark
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,Belgium and Sweden.
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, the place
who
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which
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sold the most
coffee
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between 1999 and 2004 was the
UK
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,and the place which sold the most
bananas
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between 1999 and 2004 was
Swizterland
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Switzerland
. Sweden sold the least
bananas
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&
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coffee
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and coffee
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between 1999 and 2004. Areas with the highest amount of
coffee
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sold in 1999 are
Swizterland
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Switzerland
with 3
million
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euros
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and
Denmark
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with 1.8
million
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euros
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.
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,
Denmark
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and the
UK
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have
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had
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similar amounts of
coffee
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sold in 1999 with
Denmark
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having 1.8
million
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euros
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and
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UK
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the UK
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having 1.5
million
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euros
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. The
sales
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of
coffee
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done by
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in
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the
UK
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rose exponentially between 1999 and 2004,from 1.5
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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in 2004.
Swizterlands
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Switzerland
banana
sales
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also
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drastically changed,from 15
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 47
million
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euros
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in 2004. All of these nations have increased
sales
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of
coffee
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in 2004,and all except for Sweden have increased
sales
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of
bananas
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in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, euros, uk, denmark, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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