The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs depict
numbers
of childbirth and passing away during 50 years of Correct article usage
the numbers
surveyed
in Switzerland. The Change the form of the verb
survey
data
covers the amount
of the rates in millions
.
By and large, the quantity of the
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apply
birth
increasing rapidly, Fix the agreement mistake
births
while
the passing data
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is noticeable
noticeable
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noticeably
that
motionless.
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apply
According to
the charts, the birth numbers are
rose dramatically during the Unnecessary verb
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periode
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period
in
1970 to 2020, the Change preposition
from
amount
of births peaked was predict
in 2025 which Wrong verb form
predicted
takes
up to 3 Correct subject-verb agreement
take
millions baby
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million babies
are
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be
However
, 2015 as the second most childbirth up to a hefty 2.8 millions
, decreased slightly from 2025. Meanwhile, the Change to singular
million
passed away
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passed-away
surveyed
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survey
showing
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showed
the
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data
are
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have
by
the years, the Change preposition
over
data
has slightly different amount
which counted only 1.5 Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
millions
per year for reached the peak. Change to singular
million
At the end
of the survey, this
data
surprassed
the Correct your spelling
surprised
amount
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