The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given illustrates information about birth and death rates in Switzerland that have been made by United Nations statistics over a fifty-year period.
From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the rate of birth saw an upward trend, whereas
a fluctuating downward trend can be seen in the figure for death over the years shown.
In the final year, the rate of newborn babies was highest, at 3.2 million
, meanwhile, that of the dead was lowest, at 0.8 million
.
Furthermore
, at the beginning of the period, the number of newborn children remained the same in the next ten years, at 1.2 million
. Afterwards, it grew sharply to 3 million
in 2015 before reaching a peak of 3.2 million
in the last
year. Moreover
, the data on citizens who passed away underwent a slight increase from 1 million
in 1975 to 1.3 million
in 1985. In addition
, after rising to the top of 1.5 million
in 1995, it significantly fell to 0.8 million
at the end
of the period.Submitted by khoihoangtrong96 on
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