The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The line graph illustrates the
numbers
of Underground Fix the agreement mistake
number
Station
user
in the capital of England.
Fix the agreement mistake
users
Overall
, the proportion of the
Correct article usage
apply
station
passenger
significantly Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
change
over time. The highest number the line reaches is 400 people. Meanwhile, the lowest drop touches the 100 milestone.
From the statistics, it can be inferred that early in the morning the London Underground Change the verb form
changes
Station
has the lowest users
at the time in a day at 100 citizens namely at 6.00. Correct quantifier usage
number of users
However
, at
busy Change preposition
apply
hour
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hours
such
as 8 o’clock undeniably reach the peak of passengers using the station
more specifically at 400 users.
It is noticeable that from 8.00 to 16.00 the line mostly has a downward trend and once again hit
the lowest point at 16.00. Wrong verb form
hits
Then
the number of passengers almost achieve
the peak once again approximately Verb problem
reached
at
400 users. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, the amount
of people who use the London Underground Change the quantifier
number
Station
decrease
greatly Change the verb form
decreases
at the end
of the day.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words station with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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