The charts below show the percentage of male and female worker in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female worker in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give a comparison of the proportion of male and female workers in country A and country B.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of both women and men are working in the services sector. Meanwhile, people who work in agricultural areas is higher in nation A than in nation B.
To begin
with, in state A, there are more males who work in services than females, with 56% and 49%
repectively
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respectively
.
In contrast
, there is a significant gap in agriculture with women accounting for 43% and men roughly 30%.
However
, the smallest number of employees is from the industry field.
On the other hand
, in state B,
although
the trend in the services field is similar to the other nations, the percentage of people who are employed in agriculture is very small, with only 4% combined from both genders.
Moreover
, there is a wide gap between men’s and women’s rates in the
industrial
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industry
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, at 11% and 32%, each.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • workforce
  • percentage
  • male-dominated
  • female-dominated
  • sector
  • industry
  • disparity
  • proportion
  • predominance
  • statistical
  • trend
  • comparison
  • economically active
  • gender gap
  • labor market
  • employment rate
  • significant
  • minority/majority
  • contrast
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