The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph shows the born and death
number
in Switzerland between 1970 and 2020 based on United Nations data.
Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
Overall
, birth
in Correct article usage
the swiss
swiss
rose significantly, especially in 1990-2000; Capitalize word
Swiss
while
death
rate seems Correct article usage
the death
fluctuated
over the period. In the beginning, the rates between Change the verb form
to fluctuate
birth
and dates does
not quite different, but Verb problem
are
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
time
period, they Add an article
the time
a time
has
a great gap.
In 1970-1980, Change the verb form
have
born
proportion Verb problem
the birth
in
Change preposition
of
swiss
remained stable Capitalize word
Swiss
on
1 Change preposition
at
million
. Despite this
, the trend have
increased Change the verb form
has
approximately
1 Change preposition
by approximately
million
starting from 1990, that
Correct word choice
and
reached
over 2.5 Wrong verb form
reaching
million
new baby
in 2000. Change to a plural noun
babies
Moreover
, birth
rate Correct article usage
the birth
steady
Change the word
steadily
increase
Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
around
250 Change preposition
to around
million
per 10 years. 2020 as a final result, they have over 3 million
birth
amount across the country.
An increased
Change the form of the verb
increase
of
Change preposition
in
death
rate Correct article usage
the death
happened
started from 1970 to 1990, Verb problem
apply
that
started from 1 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
and reached 1.5 million
in 1990. However
, people died
in 2000 have a decline number than before, more or less 400 Correct pronoun usage
who died
million
. The death
trend was
fell slightly in 2010, Unnecessary verb
apply
also
2020, that reached
1 Wrong verb form
reaching
million
and about 800 million
, respectively.Submitted by adhansdaily on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words death, birth, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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