The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the cyclic development of frogs in a pond.
Overall
, there are seven main stages from egg to become adult.
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Initially
, eggs that have been laid on a pond turn into embryos. From Linking Words
this
stage, the embryo that has grown as Linking Words
tadpoles
cling to water plants to get some protection from predators. Several times later, Use synonyms
tadpoles
develop with external gills on the body. These gills help them to breathe effectively in the water. Use synonyms
Along with
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this
, the tail has Linking Words
then
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also
developed continuously until the Linking Words
tadpoles
have a pair of hindlegs. In Use synonyms
this
phase, the tail has an important function as a food store to maintain Linking Words
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tadpoles
growth well. Change noun form
tadpoles'
tadpole's
Subsequently
, the front legs have existed and the tail became shorter before eventually disappearing when becoming a young frog. Linking Words
Finally
, there will be consistent growth until adult frogs have existed. Linking Words
Additionally
, all of the stages might repeat all over again as the development process happens.Linking Words
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