The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows the cyclic development of frogs in a pond.
Overall
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, there are seven main stages from egg to become adult.
Initially
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, eggs that have been laid on a pond turn into embryos. From
this
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stage, the embryo that has grown as
tadpoles
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cling to water plants to get some protection from predators. Several times later,
tadpoles
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develop with external gills on the body. These gills help them to breathe effectively in the water.
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this
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, the tail has
then
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also
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developed continuously until the
tadpoles
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have a pair of hindlegs. In
this
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phase, the tail has an important function as a food store to maintain
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tadpoles
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tadpoles'
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growth well.
Subsequently
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, the front legs have existed and the tail became shorter before eventually disappearing when becoming a young frog.
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, there will be consistent growth until adult frogs have existed.
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, all of the stages might repeat all over again as the development process happens.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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