Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent days,among many

children

spending their

time

on social networks or playing different games on phones or computers is starting to reach a concerning level these days.

As a result

,

children

have

not

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knowledge

and

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interest in a subject or a profession. I totally disagree

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statement because

this

situation is increasing day by day and

children

are becoming indifferent to the people around them. To commence with,

children

do not leave

time

for their future development and to get the necessary knowledge.Parents are

also

the reason why

children

spend their

time

on the

phone

or computer.

For instance

, parents are not spending

time

with their

children

and they are

also

spending their free

time

on the

phone

and they are not monitoring their

children

.

Furthermore

,

children

's health is greatly affected by different harmful rays emitted by the

phone

.First of all, it affects their vision and causes insomnia.

For example

, nowadays,the wearing of glasses is very common among

the

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young people and it is a very bad situation.

To conclude

,the

phone

is poisoning the

children

's

mind

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and causing them various diseases. In my point of view in order to reduce

such

situations,it is very useful for parents to pay attention to their

children

and spend more

time

with

children

in their free

time

.