Some people think that the best way to learn is from a newspaper. Others think that the best way to learn is through media. Discuss each views and your opinion.
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development of ideas
Work on providing more specific examples to support your main points. Use data, research findings, or real-life instances to make your arguments more compelling.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear logical flow between sentences and paragraphs. Transitional phrases and cohesive devices can help improve the readability and structure of your writing.
task achievement
Balance the discussion of both views before stating your opinion. Ensure that each viewpoint is given approximately equal attention to fully address the essay prompt.