the map show school map in 1985 & now. describe it
This
map illustrates the changes that have taken places
in a Fix the agreement mistake
place
school
, showing the difference of
a Change preposition
between
school
in 1985 and present
. First and foremost, the Correct article usage
the present
school
in 1985 had a total population of 1,500 people. Nowadays, the school
have 2,500 people in total. There used to be a bigger parking lot for car
in 1985 compared to what they have now. Fix the agreement mistake
cars
However
, the school
have more classrom
space now compared to Correct your spelling
classroom
the
1985 with only 2 storeys. Meanwhile, the Change the article
apply
school
now have classroom
block with 3 storeys more classroom space nearby. Based on the image, it is shown that the resource centre and computer room they have now was originally a library in 1985. Correct article usage
a classroom
Although
the library has changed, the office near it remains the same. Moving on to the sport
area, the Change the noun form
sports
school
in 1985 had a larger field than it is now. However
, the school
in the present time have pool
and and fitness centre, which are facilities that did not exist back in 1985. Add an article
a pool
Overall
, the school
nowadays have better facilities and larger
population Add an article
a larger
the larger
that
it was.Correct word choice
than
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