The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line charts illustrate the differences between
housework
time spent and ownership of electrical appliances in a country from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, the relationship between electrical appliances and the number of housework
is backwards.
It is clearly seen that three electronics such
as washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
were low Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
started
at 0 Wrong verb form
starting
until
40 percent in 1920 and Change preposition
to
peaked
in 2019 approximately at 65 to 100. Wrong verb form
peaking
While the
number of Correct word choice
The
housework
per hour in 1920 was at the maximum number that hit 50 hours
and it was lowest in 2019 that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
reached
10 Wrong verb form
reaching
hours
.
The data reveals that the percentage from
electrical appliances started to rise gradually, except Change preposition
of
washing
machines, which Change preposition
for washing
were
slightly down in 1980, but went back up in 2000. Verb problem
went
However
, the total hours
from housework
per household in a week were gently decreased until in 2019 the lowest point was at 10 hours
per week.Submitted by izzahayuni85 on
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