Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over
past
few decades, individuals trained with professional skills Correct article usage
the past
such
as Linking Words
medical
and engineering Replace the word
medicine
are
offered Wrong verb form
have been
with
Change preposition
apply
a
broad opportunities to Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
work
outside their Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
due to
the Linking Words
continually-surging
need Correct your spelling
continually surging
of
professional workers. Many believe that those people need to be encouraged to take the offer, Change preposition
for
while
others oppose Linking Words
this
view. As for my personal perspective, I believe that every individual should not Linking Words
work
overseas.
On the one hand, it is believed that working abroad will boost the chance of career promotion, Use synonyms
while
at the same time will broaden Linking Words
knowledges
and skills significantly. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
For instance
, doctors who decide to Linking Words
work
in Use synonyms
country
with severe medical issues Fix the agreement mistake
countries
such
as Burundi and Ethiopia might experience handling patients with rare Linking Words
disease
which have never been found in their own Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
countries
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
opportunity will lead to Linking Words
a
new knowledge, which can be implemented once they are back.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, the majority of Linking Words
curriculum
of specialized institutions are programmed to be only suitable in the Fix the agreement mistake
curricula
countries
where it was established. Use synonyms
This
decision is taken Linking Words
due to
the different Linking Words
situation
and Fix the agreement mistake
situations
condition
in each country. As an example, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
engineer
who pursued Add an article
an engineer
the engineer
degree
in Germany might find it hard to Add an article
a degree
work
in Indonesia, as the geographical condition of both Use synonyms
countries
differs Use synonyms
to
each other. Change preposition
from
Thus
, some people strongly believe that staying Linking Words
in
where they received their degrees Change preposition
apply
from
is a more proper decision to make.
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apply
To sum up
, both decisions have its own advantages and disadvantages. Linking Words
However
, I strongly agree that unless there is Linking Words
a
unavoidable emergence, those professional workers Change the article
an
are preferred
to Wrong verb form
prefer
work
Use synonyms
in
where their institutions are located.Change preposition
apply
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