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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter in regard to my lost
luggage
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 which I lost on your plane when I was flying from London to Vancouver
last
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 Wednesday.My booking reference number was x23467 and my seat number was D5. I was reading the book on the plane .When I finished my reading and put the book in my
bag
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 and put that
luggage
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 under my seat. When the flight landed I was in some rush and I forgot to take the
bag
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 with me but when I arrived home and remembered about the
luggage
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. My
luggage
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 is a handbagbag and It is medium in size.It is from the Aldo brand and its colour is black in colour.The
bag
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 has my name on the sticker and there are many stickers stuck on it.The
bag
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 contains
one
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 diary which is pink in colour,
one
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 pen,
one
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 book named James and Brother,
one
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 Starbucks bottle, and most importantly it has office work paper which I need urgently for my office meeting. I hope that you will find my
bag
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 really soon. If there are any charges for shipping the
bag
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then
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 I will pay it. I am really looking for hearing from you soon
as well as
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 thank you for your cooperation. Yours sincerely, Simi.

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task achievement
Ensure a clear structure by including an appropriate opening and closing. Mention next steps for resolution in the closing for better task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to manage information and ideas.
coherence cohesion
To improve your score, avoid long sentences with multiple ideas and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.
task achievement
For better task achievement, explain the significance of the items lost and indicate any identifying features that might help the airline locate your bag quickly.
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