Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter in regard to my lost

luggage

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which I lost on your plane when I was flying from London to Vancouver

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Wednesday.My booking reference number was x23467 and my seat number was D5. I was reading the book on the plane .When I finished my reading and put the book in my

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and put that

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under my seat. When the flight landed I was in some rush and I forgot to take the

bag

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with me but when I arrived home and remembered about the

luggage

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. My

luggage

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is a handbagbag and It is medium in size.It is from the Aldo brand and its colour is black in colour.The

bag

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has my name on the sticker and there are many stickers stuck on it.The

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contains

one

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diary which is pink in colour,

one

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pen,

one

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book named James and Brother,

one

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Starbucks bottle, and most importantly it has office work paper which I need urgently for my office meeting. I hope that you will find my

bag

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really soon. If there are any charges for shipping the

bag

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then

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I will pay it. I am really looking for hearing from you soon

as well as

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thank you for your cooperation. Yours sincerely, Simi.

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task achievement

Ensure a clear structure by including an appropriate opening and closing. Mention next steps for resolution in the closing for better task achievement.

coherence cohesion

Use a range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to manage information and ideas.

coherence cohesion

To improve your score, avoid long sentences with multiple ideas and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

task achievement

For better task achievement, explain the significance of the items lost and indicate any identifying features that might help the airline locate your bag quickly.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

215 words

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