This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram demonstrates all

steps

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the steps

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of the process for recycling plastic

bottles

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.

Initially

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,

such

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bottles

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are put in special garbage containers. The rubbish

track

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truck

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loads the trash can with these

bottles

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and goes to the recycling centre where workers

are sorting

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sort

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all trash. Despite identifying marks on the containers many people just pet everything including organic waste, glass and many more unnecessary things. At

this

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centre

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all

this

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garbage compresses into the lodge blocks which arrive in crushing machine.

As a result

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, there are a lot of little fractions

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They are washed in special baths

and

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apply

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crumbled into tiny pellets and

move

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moved

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futher

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further

to an oven. After that, raw material appears. It is used in producing

of

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apply

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clothes, packets, plastic

bottles

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and containers.

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, the cycle repeats again and again.