This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates all all
steps
of the process for recycling plastic Correct article usage
the steps
bottles
.
Initially
, such
bottles
are put in special garbage containers. The rubbish track
loads the trash can with these Correct your spelling
truck
bottles
and goes to the recycling centre where workers are sorting
all trash. Despite identifying marks on the containers many people just pet everything including organic waste, glass and many more unnecessary things.
At Wrong verb form
sort
this
centreAdd a comma
,
this
garbage compresses into the lodge blocks which arrive in crushing machine.As a result
, there are a lot of little fractions?
They are washed in special baths Change the punctuation
.
and
crumbled into tiny pellets and Correct word choice
apply
move
Wrong verb form
moved
futher
to an oven. After that, raw material appears. It is used in producing Correct your spelling
further
of
clothes, packets, plastic Change preposition
apply
bottles
and containers. Therefore
, the cycle repeats again and again.Submitted by julykryuchkova on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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