This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates all
steps
Correct article usage
the steps
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of the process for recycling plastic
bottles
.
Initially
,
such
bottles
are put in special garbage containers. The rubbish
track
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truck
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loads the trash can with these
bottles
and goes to the recycling centre where workers
are sorting
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sort
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all trash. Despite identifying marks on the containers many people just pet everything including organic waste, glass and many more unnecessary things. At
this
centre
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,
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all
this
garbage compresses into the lodge blocks which arrive in crushing machine.
As a result
, there are a lot of little fractions
?
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.
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They are washed in special baths
and
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apply
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crumbled into tiny pellets and
move
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moved
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futher
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further
to an oven. After that, raw material appears. It is used in producing
of
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apply
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clothes, packets, plastic
bottles
and containers.
Therefore
, the cycle repeats again and again.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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