The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The line charts illustrate the differences between
housework
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time spent and ownership of electrical appliances in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the percentage of electrical devices in households is significantly
backwards
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from the number of time in
housework
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per week.
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the total
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hours
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of
housework
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has declined over the past decade, the electrical appliances ownership rate has remained relatively increased. It is clearly seen that three electronics
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as washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners were low starting at 0 to 40 percent in 1920 and peaking in 2019 approximately at 65 to 100. The statistic of
housework
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per hour in 1920 was at the maximum figure that hit 50
hours
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and it was lowest in 2019 reaching 10
hours
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. The data reveals that the percentage of electrical appliances started to rise gradually, except for washing machines slightly down in 1980, but went back up in 2000.
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, the total
hours
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from housekeeping per household in a week were gently decreased until in 2019 the lowest point was at 10
hours
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per week.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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