Governments should spend less money on restoring old buildings and more money for new housing and roads development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Spending less
money
on restoring old Use synonyms
buildings
and more Use synonyms
money
on new roads and housing developments nowadays can create different perspectives. In my opinion, I prefer to restore old Use synonyms
buildings
and new road development than build new housing and I would like to discuss more from my own perspective.
The occasions why I agree to allocate more Use synonyms
money
to reconstruction of old Use synonyms
buildings
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it is because of keeping the historical value, as a sample, there are plenty of ancient Linking Words
buildings
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such
as castles that can be used as a government office or monuments. Linking Words
Secondly
, the expenditure Linking Words
that is
used for remodelling will be less cost. But in the meantime, I agree to spend more Linking Words
money
on road development because it is very crucial for many sectors Use synonyms
such
as governments, private companies and citizens because it is obviously related to public uses.
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Hence
, building new housing in my opinion should be reduced because it is not effective, especially if one area already has another building with the same function. Linking Words
Besides
, Governments should be pondering to decide which spot that eligible to do new construction. Linking Words
However
, it is possible if Governments lack of function hall.
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Overall
, remodelling old Linking Words
buildings
is more efficient and effective because of less cost and will be able to keep the historical values. Building new roads will help many sectors to do their main activities. Use synonyms
However
, building new housing is the opposite and should be done if it is urgent. Linking Words
It is clear that
either new constructions or reconstruction should be decided with legitimate and eligible consideration.Linking Words
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task achievement
Clearly state your position on the issue in the introduction to provide a clear framework for your argument.
task achievement
Develop your main points further with specific examples and explanations to clearly convey your ideas.
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by ensuring each paragraph flows smoothly and transitions between ideas are clear.
coherence cohesion
Provide clear topic sentences for each paragraph to enhance reader understanding of your main points.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, framing the argument effectively.
task achievement
The response addresses both aspects of the question, considering both restoration and new development.