the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The plans show the
infastructure
of a bookstore in 2000 and its current status.
Correct your spelling
infrastructure
Overall
, It can be noticeable that a significant development in the bookstore since 2000.Linking Words
According to
the current plan it includes a cafe and others Linking Words
has
been relocated to different areas.
In 2000, Change the verb form
have
Use synonyms
fiction
books area was located Correct article usage
the fiction
at
Change preposition
in
north
which has been replaced by four sections;art,hobbies,cookery, and Add an article
the north
fiction
which were at the Use synonyms
center
of Change the spelling
centre
bookstore
.Add an article
the bookstore
a bookstore
And
Correct word choice
Also
also
, there Linking Words
were
another Change the verb form
was
fiction
section Use synonyms
at
the Change preposition
in
North
east which Correct your spelling
Northeast
Linking Words
also
replaced by Add a missing verb
was also
non fictions
books.Correct your spelling
non-fiction
Furthermore
, Linking Words
on
the Change preposition
in
center
, art, hobbies and cookery books Change the spelling
centre
was
located in 2000, but that location is allocated for a reference area with tables and chairs.
It can be seen that the place where Change the verb form
were
non
Add a hyphen
non-fiction
fiction
section was located in 2000 , has been replaced by a cafe. Travel and new book area has not been changed over the years and entrance Use synonyms
also
remains unchanged.Linking Words
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