The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The graph gives information about the proportion of
households
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owning and renting
accommodation
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the trend of
households
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in owned
accommodation
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increase
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increased
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over
years
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the years
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while
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households
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in rented
accommodation
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decrease
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in the given time frame. In 1918,
households
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owning
accommodation
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stood at 22% and rented
accommodation
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stood at 78%. The percentage of owned
accommodation
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household
increase
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increased
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steadily over time and achieved
equiblirium
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equilibrium
with rented
accommodation
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in 1971 with 50% each. Before 1971, owned
accommodation
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had always lower proportion compared to rented
accommodation
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. From 1971 onwards, owned
accommodation
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take
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took
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bigger
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a bigger
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percentage than rented
accommodation
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and reached its peak in 2001 at almost 70%. After
achieved
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achieving
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its peak, the proportion of owned
accommodation
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slightly
decrease
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decreased
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to 64% in 2011. Meanwhile,
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the rented
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rented
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the rented
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accommodation
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trend
decrease
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decreased
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steadiliy
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steadily
over time and achieved its lowest point in 2001 with 30% and
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ended
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up at 35% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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