Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem

Nowadays,there are many types of criminals in society,and some robbers
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re-offened
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re-offended
re-offered
when they have been punished. Because,l think,
yhey
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they
get used to stealing l am going to explain about
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topic during the essay. Looking at several problems one of the most
notice cominal
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due
to
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burglary,
mugger
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and others.
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,
This robbers
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always
re-offened
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re-offended
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re-offend
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firstly
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reason
of
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this
,
l
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think that it needs so much money to them.Because
,
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majority
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of them
is
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poorer than other people.
Also
,the reason
of
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stealing
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the stealing
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of robbers can not
only
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.There are many reasons
of
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these
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. There are many solutions for decreasing crimes.
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as
,
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it must not pardon criminals.
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, if
criminal
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the criminal
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is not pardoned by
government
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the government
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,
this
will cause
very
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bad situation.
Also
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many people think that they are
remited
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remitted
when
criminers
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criminals
follow disciplines and it has to do
this
is that arresting criminals is be penalty very easy for
robber
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robbers
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today. So they need to punish hardly. In conclusion, some people continue to commit crimes after they have
punished
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been punished
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. I hope that the government can solve for prevention of stealing
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