The three pie charts illustrate degrees granted in four fields at the National University in three decades (1990, 2000, and 2010.)

The three pie charts illustrate degrees granted in four fields at the National University in three decades (1990, 2000, and 2010.)
The given pie charts represent the percentage of National University's graduates from four different majors in three consecutive decades, starting from 1990 up until 2010.
Overall
, it can be noticed that, during those 20 years, Computer Science degree receivers were able to maintain
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position as the leading major with the largest portion of the charts. In the first ten years, the diagram highlights that there was a significant rise in the number of students graduating from Computer Science
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compared to the other. In comparison, the percentage of Medicine graduates experienced an increase as well, but not as notable as the previous major.
On the other hand
, both Business and Law majors' percentages experienced a downfall.
Subsequently
, in the next ten years, it is very
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noticeable
that the majority of the chart was taken over by Computer Science graduates.
Furthermore
, there was growth in students graduating from the Law major.
Additionally
,
in contrast
with the first period, the Medicine degree grantees' percentage fell.
However
, the
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of Business degree receivers consistently went down.
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