The graph below shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.
The line graph describes the production of three different fossil fuels in an unknown country in the whole
period
between 1981 and 2000
Overall
, the
Correct article usage
apply
petroleum
always
at the top of Add a missing verb
is always
productions
levels.Change the noun form
production
Petroleum
and coal followed an
Correct article usage
apply
eratic
developments. Looking at the graph, Correct your spelling
erratic
Petroleum
was constantly the prevalent fuel used in production .Athough
there were many Correct your spelling
Although
oscillation
in Change to a plural noun
oscillations
manufacture
levels.
At the beginning of the Replace the word
manufacturing
period
, the number of tonnes
of petroleum
increased significantly from nearly 100 to over 120. However
, from 1987 there was a noteworthy fall in petroleum
, in particular
nearly 90 in 1991. In the rest of the period
between 1992 and 2000, the aforementioned firgue
went up remarkably, up to over 130 Correct your spelling
figure
fire
tonnes
of petroleum
.
On the other hand
, the amount of natural gas remained unchanged at 40 tonnes
until 1994, there was a rapid rise, up to over 80 tonnes
in 2000. Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
stability
of coal remained at 80 Correct article usage
the stability
tonnes
until 1984, the
huge amount of coal dropped significantly. after that, from 1987 to the rest of the Rephrase
when the
period
, the
slight decrease Correct article usage
a
of
the consumption of coal still happened.Change preposition
in
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