The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts information for the average household recycling in three countries the
UK
, France
and Germany
in 10 years from 2005 to 2015. It is clear from the graph that Germany
has declined from begin until 2013.
France
started with 50% in 2005 and that ranked the top one. In addition
, after that, the percentage decreased swiftly until 2013 achieving the lowest 30%. However
, the average uplifting in next two years areving 40%. Nevertheless
, Germany
faced
quickly climbing start by 20% and Verb problem
apply
continue
jumping until 2009 Wrong verb form
continued
Germany
became higher than France
.
Moreover
, the UK
was the second highest by fewer than 40% and increased slightly until 2009 to become the top one. In addition
, the UK
ended 2015 with more than 60%.
To sum up
we could say that 2009 was the biggest dropped in France
as well as
in the same year Garmany and the UK
climbed into France
.Submitted by Yousef
on
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