The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph illustrates the number of
stores
that bankrupt and the count of new Use synonyms
shops
that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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Overall
, it is clearly seen that 2011 was the highest Linking Words
year
of massive opening Use synonyms
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stores
, and 2018 was the lowest Change preposition
of stores
year
throughout the Use synonyms
year
. Meanwhile, for the closures of Use synonyms
shops
, 2013 was the most frequent time Use synonyms
stores
closed.
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To begin
with, 2011 was the best Linking Words
year
for new Use synonyms
shops
, there were successfully 8500 Use synonyms
stores
opening. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
number fell in 2012, with only 4000 opened, and the rest of it faced a Linking Words
fluctuative
rate until 2018.
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fluctuating
On the other hand
, at the beginning of 2011, there were 6500 units that failed and led to close. In 2013 the worst thing happened with 7100 Linking Words
shops
shutting down their operation. Use synonyms
Fortunately
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Fortunately,
this
number decreased significantly in 2015, but the condition started to rise again in 2016 to 2018.Linking Words
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