The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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The graph illustrates the number of
stores
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that bankrupt and the count of new
shops
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that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that 2011 was the highest
year
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of massive opening
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stores
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, and 2018 was the lowest
year
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throughout the
year
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. Meanwhile, for the closures of
shops
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, 2013 was the most frequent time
stores
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closed.
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with, 2011 was the best
year
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for new
shops
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, there were successfully 8500
stores
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opening.
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,
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number fell in 2012, with only 4000 opened, and the rest of it faced a
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rate until 2018.
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, at the beginning of 2011, there were 6500 units that failed and led to close. In 2013 the worst thing happened with 7100
shops
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shutting down their operation.
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this
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number decreased significantly in 2015, but the condition started to rise again in 2016 to 2018.
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