Most people prefer shopping in supermarkets nowadays. How does this affect the local shops? What are the positive and negative impacts of this development?
In the present day, the majority of a lot of local small markets have closed.
people
purchase products from Use synonyms
mall
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centres
,because it is comfortable to buy all the stuff in one place.It has a negative effect on local Use synonyms
shops
, Use synonyms
however
, building shop Linking Words
centres
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contributes
to economic development.
There are two beneficial effects of shopping Change the verb form
contribute
centres
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
supermarkets
can secure all items under one roof. As an outcome, Use synonyms
people
have the opportunity to find all products in one area. It helps save their time and spend it on other activities. Use synonyms
For example
, the latest survey by "The Times of Canada" reveals that 40% of the public in Canada claims that they prefer to visit the major shopping hub Linking Words
instead
of small outlets for daily procurement.
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Secondly
, demand for Linking Words
supermarkets
contributes to the construction of Use synonyms
mall
Use synonyms
centres
. Use synonyms
As a result
, it leads to infrastructure development. Linking Words
For example
, in Dubai 1000 new Linking Words
supermarkets
were constructed Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
Hence
, the economy of the country dramatically increased in the Linking Words
last
several years.
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On the other hand
, the development of Linking Words
mall
Use synonyms
centres
has a negative effect on local Use synonyms
shops
. Due lack of trade local Use synonyms
shops
are forced to close. Use synonyms
As a result
, many small influencers and workers lose their jobs. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
leads to unemployment and a low standard of living. Linking Words
For instance
, the major Linking Words
mall
Use synonyms
centres
are replacing minor Use synonyms
shops
in many areas of Dubai.Use synonyms
Hence
, a lot of influencers close their own business every year, Linking Words
although
the level of unemployment in poor areas increased Linking Words
last
year.
In conclusion, the majority of Linking Words
people
prefer Use synonyms
mall
Use synonyms
centers
nowadays, Change the spelling
centres
as a result
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Add the comma(s)
,
However
, the construction of large Linking Words
supermarkets
saves Use synonyms
people
's time, and Use synonyms
also
has a good effect on the economy of the country.Linking Words
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