The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.
The four pie charts
illustrates
the proportions of tourists visited from four various countries to Change the verb form
illustrate
Australia
and Germany
in the years of 1960 to 2010.
Overall
, according to
the pie charts, Europeans
were an affirmative in both countries, whereas
Asians were a significant visitors
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visitor
Australia
in 2010, Europeans
remained leading places in Germany
after fifty years.
It is clearly seen that, in 1960 the most
number of Correct word choice
highest
Europeans
to
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in
Australia
were
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was
with
53% and Change preposition
apply
to
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apply
Germany
45% respectively. The British were the second top comers to Australia
, with a quarter of the proportion, which is exactly the same as the USA travelers
in Change the spelling
travellers
Germany
. Nevertheless
, Germany
had 20% of tourists
, Correct article usage
the tourists
10
% Correct word choice
and 10
of
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apply
was
Asians.
The charts suggest that, in 50 year period Asians regulated all other communities in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Australia
, which made up 63%, whereas
Europeans
proportions took a sharp nosedive from 53% to 10%, which was the epic downfall in 2010.Replace the word
European
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