The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph compares the information of two distinct
music
sites in terms of visiting during the 15-day period.
Overall
, it is clear that
both sites fluctuated rapidly from the beginning to the end. Besides
most days
, the figure for visitors
to Pop Parada was more than Music
choice.
For the first 9 days
, there was a significant decrease in the proportion of viewers to Pop Parada sites, which fell from about 120,000 visitors
to 40,00 visitors
. However
, For the next two days
, the figure witnessed a rapid growth at around 150,000. In the 12th and 13th, the number
of visitors
went down dramatically. The number
for the former was about 81,000 and just 80,000 for the latter. In the end, it reached its peak during the 15-day period, which was around 170,000 visitors
.
Meanwhile, In the following 11 days
, visitors
to Music
Choice varied slightly it is obvious it remained above 20,000 visitors
. During the next 3 days
, the number
of visitors
experienced an upward trend to the highest level at approximately 120,000 viewers. By contrast
, on the last
day, the number
of visitors
to Music
Choice decreases rapidly by over 40,000 visitors
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music, days, visitors, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compares" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.
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