The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the contrasting changes in the floor plan of a public
library
twenty years ago and today. There are significant alterations in public libraries 20 years ago compared to today. One significant alteration is the re-arrangements of rooms and
sections
inside the
library
such
as the reading room
replaced
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being replaced
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by a computer room, the CDs and videos
section
replaced with a
children’s
fiction
section
, the
children’s
book
section
with a lecture room, and the enquiry desk with a cafe. Twenty years ago, you would see two sets of round tables surrounded by chairs in the central
sections
of the
library
with both adult
fiction
books and non-
fiction
books
sections
on the west and east sides of the
library
respectively. Compared to today, the central
sections
are empty
while
on the east side, you would see adult
fiction
sections
, an information desk and self-service machines. On the west side, you would see a reference book
section
. On the northwest side of the
library
, there are
children’s
fiction
section
with two sets of sofas that
holds
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children’s
events
such
as storytelling.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, sections, section, children’s, fiction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Floor plan
  • Public library
  • Layout
  • Bookshelves
  • Reading areas
  • Digitalization
  • Technological advancement
  • User needs
  • Space allocation
  • Facilities
  • Evolution
  • Community
  • Renovation
  • Adaptation
  • Accessibility
  • Multimedia
  • Archives
  • Reference section
  • Study carrels
  • Children's area
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