The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the contrasting changes in the floor plan of a public
library
twenty years ago and today.
There are significant alterations in public libraries 20 years ago compared to today. One significant alteration is the re-arrangements of rooms and Use synonyms
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with a lecture room, and the enquiry desk with a cafe.
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