The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the contrasting changes in the floor plan of a public
library
twenty years ago and today.
There are significant alterations in public libraries 20 years ago compared to today. One significant alteration is the re-arrangements of rooms and sections
inside the library
such
as the reading room replaced
by a computer room, the CDs and videos Add a missing verb
being replaced
section
replaced with a children’s
fiction
section
, the children’s
book section
with a lecture room, and the enquiry desk with a cafe.
Twenty years ago, you would see two sets of round tables surrounded by chairs in the central sections
of the library
with both adult fiction
books and non-fiction
books sections
on the west and east sides of the library
respectively.
Compared to today, the central sections
are empty while
on the east side, you would see adult fiction
sections
, an information desk and self-service machines. On the west side, you would see a reference book section
. On the northwest side of the library
, there are children’s
fiction
section
with two sets of sofas that holds
Correct subject-verb agreement
hold
children’s
events such
as storytelling.Submitted by athaarhdyn on
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