Some people think that it is good to spend money on finding life on other planets, while others believe it is a waste and governments should focus on problems on the earth. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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an enoroums

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enoroums

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enormous

number of researchers studying the possibility of finding life outside of

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. People have been divided into two sections; one can't wait to hear the news that they can

finally

live on other planets, and the other finds it a not very good idea.

This

essay disagrees with the idea of living anywhere but on earth. First of all, do we have to leave? Today, we are facing many environmental challenges,

such

as climate change, the ozone hole, lack of food and water resources.. etc.

This

is the main reason that pushed scientists to start research and try to find out if there are any creatures living in space.

However

this

process takes a lot of time, money, and effort to be done.

In contrast

, we can solve most of the issues we are facing today with simple solutions. Using renewable energy,

for example

, will cost less money in the future and be more beneficial for the environment.

Moreover

, reducing the waste of food may have a huge impact on the percentage of poor people in every country. We can help our world by using simple methods. In my opinion, I believe that the government should spend more money to support inventors. The world is big, and there are many things that we have not discovered yet, and we should work on that. We should ask ourselves: How can we use

this

land and these resources in the best way that can help humanity? In conclusion, it is not a bad idea to try to discover what is beyond our planet, but we should focus on understanding what is around us first.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

275 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Space exploration
Extraterrestrial life
Technological advancements
Investment in the future
Immediate problems
Poverty alleviation
Healthcare system
Educational resources
Fiscal responsibility
Cost-effectiveness
Sustainable investments
Funding allocation
Interplanetary research
Cosmic curiosity
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