The bar chart and table show information about foreighn tourism and annual income. Write a report on the following topic

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The given bar chart and table provide data about number of tourists and yearly income in each country in 2019 and 2020.

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, the number of tourists fell in comparison to 2019 and the total profit of businesses became less satisfying in 2020. The most visited countries in 2019 were China and Japan,

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tendency in tourism for the rest of the countries demonstrated stability in the same year. As for 2020, the least country which were visited by parents were The US and Canada. It is clearly shown that the highest income (3.5 million dollars) in 2019 was from the Hotels and Resort industry.

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, by 2020

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industry became the least profitable industry among the others.

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, by 2020 Restaurants, Bars and Souvenir shops decreased profit by two times. The data suggest that the decreased presence of tourists in listed countries leads to decreased profit for various businesses as well.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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5 paragraphs

154 words

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