In some countries, more and more people are becoming intrested in finding out about history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this ? how can people research this ?

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the reasons and how individuals can research
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of the house that they
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what is the history behind the
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the other hand, homeowners want to know why the house is for sale and what is the
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to sell the
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new owners would be
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and police
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the
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neighbours,
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imagine a person who wants to buy a
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of the building for
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of reasons,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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