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Band 7.5

You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say why you want to come to the restaurant and when how many people will attend the dinner what special requirements you have You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you because I want to organise a special dinner so I would appreciate your help and
further
 communication.
To begin
 with, I want to book an entire hall and spend an enjoyable time with my friends to celebrate our personal date, to clarify, not a birthday or a newborn's day. The day I want it to take place is June 10. Afterwards, talking about the organisation process, there will be up to 20 people but it is not 100 per cent so it is better to serve 21 places. I want to order special decorations but I have to warn you that there should not be any tulips because some of my guests are allergic to them.
Then
, you can decorate the hall preferably in pastel or black and white colours, for pastels I would like
for instance
 light brown, grey and white.
Finally
, I have chosen from a menu a bunch of positions,
furthermore
, we can discuss it personally with your professional pieces of advice. But I would like it to consist of either meat or seafood. I hope I made my main preferences clear, so I look forward to your reply and
further
 discussions. Thank you for your time and understanding. Sincerely John Smith.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea for better coherence.
Task Achievement
Consider specifying more details about your special requirements to fully address the task.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, detailed main body, and polite conclusion.
Task Achievement
Effective use of formal tone suitable for the context of writing to a restaurant for booking.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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