In some countries, children are often told that, they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In certain cultures,

children

are often advised that they are able to accomplish anything through hard

work

.

This

essay will suggest that

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building self-confidence and increasing the creativity of individuals are the biggest advantages of

this

while

setting up unrealistic goals and increasing anxiety and stress appear to be the preliminary disadvantages. It is mandatory to often motivate

children

by saying anything is achievable unless they do hard

work

because it improves their confidence.

Children

will find various pathways to accomplish their goals, thereby, they eventually improve their creativity,

as a consequence

, they gradually alleviate the fear of taking risks and facing challenges in their lives. So that,

children

become strong and independent individuals who are good at critical thinking and other soft skills.

For example

, a survey conducted by the University of California revealed that, the

children

who were taught that anything is possible if practice hard, showed a greater potential to complete the tasks, that they were assigned to do than other participants.

However

, there are certain disadvantages

also

associated with

this

statement. The majority of people at present seem to told their

children

to do some unrealistic tasks. They often convince their

children

that they can achieve any goal through hard

work

. But on some occasions,

this

may be toxic to

children

’s minds and causes build up huge pressure on them.

As a result

of that,

children

will undergo stress, anxiety and unnecessary competition and be totally exhausted by the heavy workload. Ultimately,

this

will reduce the productivity of

children

and they might feel disappointment and frustration.

For instance

, it has been scientifically proven that

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a higher level of depression

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with reduced concentration and eventually causes less productivity of pupils. In conclusion, making

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by teaching them nothing is impossible through hard

work

is an essential component

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their cognitive development. And

also

it is aimed at improving their self-confidence and creativity.

On the other hand

, allowing

children

to pursue some unachievable goals is not good for both their physical and mental well-being because it puts unnecessary pressure on them.